Review Comments of Brotato potato

Overall Score: 5.25

Breakdown of Scores:

• Clarity and Grammar (40%): 5.5
• Vocabulary (25%): 5.0
• Structure (25%): 5.0
• Depth of Thought (10%): 5.0

What You Did Well:

✅ Engaging Storyline – You created a fun and creative story about Brotato, which keeps the reader interested!

Spelling, Punctuation, and Capitalization Mistakes:

• "Brotato potato :" → "Brotato Potato:" (Capitalize "Potato" after the colon)
• "everyday" → "every day" (Correct spelling when referring to "each day")
• "a another potato" → "another potato" (Remove the extra "a")

Areas for Improvement:

1️⃣ Sentence Variety – Many sentences start with "Brotato" or "He." Try mixing up sentence structures for better flow.

• Example: Instead of "Brotato went to the weights and started lifting…", try "Grabbing the weights, Brotato began lifting…"

2️⃣ More Descriptive Language – Use stronger adjectives and verbs to make the story more vivid.

• Example: Instead of "big and strong," try "huge and muscular"

Keep writing! You have a great imagination—just work on polishing your grammar and style! 😊